13 responses to “* Haiku – sense

      • I translated “beyond good sense” to mean “beyond all sense” . . . “beyond sense and feeling” . . . “beyond thinking and sensing” . . . “beyond sense AND nonsense.”

        Maybe you meant “beyond good sense” to mean “it’s a no brainer.”

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        • You are spot on Nancy. ๐Ÿ™‚ I used good sense because this is a phrase that tends to keep us limited and set in our “knowing” ways. I also wanted to open up the possibilities of being beyond sense all together … And of course nonsense denies our senses completely! Many layers of word play to play with.
          Thank you for playing with me โค

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  1. … then dance
    with the transparence
    of Love
    _________________
    your haiku inspired these line spontaneously!
    You write for the Soul Val!
    Thank you, have a nice week-enbd ๐Ÿ™‚ โ™ฅ

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  2. Thank you for dropping by my blog and helping me discover your beautiful writing! I love haikus and this one of yours make so much ‘sense’! It reminded me of Rumi’s line..โ€œBeyond our ideas of right-doing and wrong-doing,
    there is a field. Iโ€™ll meet you there”..

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